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标题: 2021.06.12大学英语四级考试 [打印本页]

作者: etthink 时间: 2021-6-12 12:55
标题: 2021.06.12大学英语四级考试
作文：
技术让人上瘾。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay titled "Are people becoming addicted to technology?". The statement given below is for your reference. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
Numerous studies claim that addiction to technology is real and it has the same effect on the brain as drug addiction.
参考作文：
In contemporary（当代的，感觉这个词有点高级，之前一般写作文都是now,以前上大学有一本泛读教材叫contemporary comprehension reading） society，there is a prevalent phenomenon（这个词组也不错，自己想到的只有popular） that people in growing numbers（感觉这个不好，明显数字生活应当是digital） find it difficult to live without technology.Numerous studies claim that addiction to technology has the same effect on the brain as drug addiction(这算写作中的扣题吗？).
Undoubtedly，such addiction has a range of negative（正面影响是 positive） effects on modern people.
Firstly，a mass of students spend enormous（这个词也有点高级） time playing on their mobile phones（pad....），which dramatically reduces their attention span and decreases their learning efficiency.
Then，employees of today are too dependent on technological devices while working.As a result，they might，to some extent，become lazier and even sometimes think passively.Besides，in our daily life，modern people have become progressively indifferent to each other. At restaurants，we can often see that 8
out of 10 people stare at their phones instead of talking with their friends sitting next to them.
There are several ways（几种方法，后面只写了两个，这可以叫several吗？） to prevent this trend from worsening. To begin with, parents ought to guide their kids to use technology in a readonale way. Moreover, it is high time some tech-giants lauched anti-addiction systems in their products.（另外这个有点跑题了，文章的主题是对科技产生依赖，并没有说大人不依赖，大人也依赖，科技的依赖=手机的依赖吗？）

翻译：
茶叶。
铁观音（Tieguanyin）是中国最受欢迎的茶之一，原产自福建省安溪县西坪镇，如今安溪全县普遍种植，但该县不同地区生产的铁观音又各具风味。铁观音一年四季均可采摘，尤以春秋两季采摘的茶叶品质最佳。铁观音加工非常复杂，需要专门的技术和丰富的经验。铁观音含有多种维生素，喝起来口感独特。常饮铁观音有助于预防心脏病、降低血压、增强记忆力。
Tieguanyin is one of the most popular types of tea in China with its origin in Xiping Town，Anxi County，Fujian Province.
Although（这个连词合适吗） widely planted in Anxi County，the tea produced in different parts tastes very differently.Tieguanyin can be picked all the year around with the best in spring and autumn.The tea involves very complex process，which needs professional skills and sophisticated experiences.As it contains many vitamins and possesses a unique flavour，the tea helps prevent（这个词绝对是四级高频词） heart diseases，lower blood pressure and improve memory if one drinks it regularly.

阅读：
数字对人生活的影响
人们对工作态度的转变。

作者: etthink 时间: 2021-6-14 12:25
龙井（Longing）是一种绿茶，主要产自中国东部沿海的浙江省。龙井茶独特的香味和口感为其赢得了“中国名茶”的称号，在中国深受大众的欢迎，在海外饮用的人也越来越多。龙并茶通常手工制作，其价格可能极其昂贵，也可能比较便宜，这取决于的生长地、采摘时间和制作工艺。龙井茶富含生素C和其它多种有益健康的元素。经常喝龙井茶有助于减轻疲劳，延缓衰老。
Longing is a type of green tea which is mainly produced in Zhejiang Province in the coastal area in east China.With the unique fragrance and flavour，the tea is well recognized as China's Famous Tea which enjoys great popularity at home and also increasing popularity overseas.Longjing is usually handmade.It can be extremely expensive or comparative cheap，which depends on the origin，the picking time and the workmanship.As it contains rich Vitamin C and many other beneficial elements，the tea helps relieve fatigue and delay the aging process if one drinks it regularly.
另一种翻译：

Longing is a kind of green tea, which is mainly produced in Zhejiang Province along the east coast of China. The unique aroma（这个词和fragrance相比呢？） and taste of Longjing tea have earned it （这个赢得也好像比上面翻译得好）the title of "Famous Tea of China". It is very popular in China and more and more people are drinking it overseas. Longing tea is usually handmade, and can be very expensive or very cheap（两个very好吗） depending on where it is grown, when it is picked and how it is made. Longing tea is rich in vitamin C and many other healthy elements. Drinking Longing tea regularly helps to relieve fatigue and delay aging.

作者: etthink 时间: 2021-6-14 12:41
technology will make people lay.

作者: etthink 时间: 2021-6-14 15:21

Is technology making people lazy?

Recently, the topic of the impact of technology has been brought into focus. According to a recent survey conducted by CCTV, a high proportion of 84.7 percent of people admitted that technology had great influence on their life and they couldn’t live without it.

There is no denying that technology enjoys many advantages. For example, the Internet enables people to know the latest news all over the world. However, it also brings its own problems. For one thing, the technology is making people lazier. For example, they will buy food online instead of cooking at home. For another, some young people who are addicted to social networking websites or online games isolate themselves in their virtual world and are too lazy to communicate with people in the real world.

In brief, taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that the Internet poses both opportunities and challenges to our modern life. Only by making reasonable use of it can we benefit considerably.

作文读一下来，感觉作文主是套模板，大多数内容是套句型的。

作者: etthink 时间: 2021-6-14 15:33

Do Violent Video Games Increase Aggression?

With the development of the Internet and technology, video games are becoming increasingly popular among people especially the youngsters. However, it is a controversial issue（话题，感觉这个短语用得不错） that has raised wide public concern（广泛关注，为什么不用 widespread concern wide和public放在一起不是语意重复吗？）.

In my view, we should hold a cautious attitude（这是一种什么态度，strick attitude或critical attitude或objective attitude...） toward some of the violent video games. On the one hand, there is no denying the fact that playing video games during the leisure time can make people relaxed. But on the other hand, we have to admit that there are some potential problems with some of the video games. With the help of special effect in video games, violent elements in video games are more and more thrilling for the players. In my opinion, those elements of violence could have some bad influences on people, especially children and then contribute to the violence in society.

Considering all those elements, in order to provide a better environment for the youngsters, I suggest that we should set up a violence rating system（分级系统？） on violent video games, so people will know which level of violence they are accessing to.

参考资料：

美国电影分级制度

The MPAA Film Rating System

作者: etthink 时间: 2021-6-14 15:36

Are people becoming addicted to technology?

In this digital era technology seems to be a part of our lives since we rely on it when working or studying or even enjoying ourselves. People in mounting numbers find it difficult to live without technology, especially the internet access. For example, we can see everywhere that people watch short videos one after another for a long time, click their social software every few minutes, read e-books all day long without looking up from their screens. Once without the internet access, they don’t know what to do and will possibly be anxious, panic and impatient with everything.

Numerous studies claim that addiction to technology has the same effect on the brain as drug addiction. Therefore, we must do something to prevent this trend from worsening. First of all, we must develop some helpful hobbies such as reading, dancing, singing, etc. which can enrich our lives when there is no internet access. Moreover, authority related and tech-giants involved should establish laws or restrictions to prevent people from addiction.

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